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KATE I lived thus chapter. I think I understand this is your re-write I read the original. It will take time but I'm pretty sure I'll love ❤️ it. What a great start 👏 👌 🙌.

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Hi D, I hope you enjoy the rewrite. Thank you

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Loved the first version. Can't wait to see what you do with it😁

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Hi Jeff, thank you. I want to lift the story with more emotional and sexual growth. I am pleased you like it so far

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A beautiful beginning Kate!

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Hi John, I remember you enjoyed this story the first time around. I hope you are enjoying it again. Thank you for your immense support.

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Absolutely! Love your work, It’s always filled with passion and promises!

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Thank you very much John

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I like the growth and additional depth of the characters and plot. (Don't care for a lime green rug or carpet.😉😂) Have you allowed for new likes and replies? Thank you, Kate. Lots of work going forward with this project.

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Hi Bill, Thank you. Sadly, I cannot do anything about likes because doing so would unpublish the chapter, and I didn’t want to lose the comments already there. As you can see, though, you can leave new comments. Thank you so much for your support.

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Will do.

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Really looking forward to the rest of this story, Kate. I am sure it will be delicious!

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Hi David, thank you for becoming a paid subscriber. I am thrilled you like my series. I have many other stories besides this series in my Age-Gap/Family category. Have a lovely weekend

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