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Chester Holic's avatar

Now that is a man with a grand plan. Not to mention the money to pursue it to perfection. He admitted the first part was for fun but sure got her attention with that one line about being her new husband. With all he has assembled she really does have a lot of decisions to make. The letter did clear up a lot about what his expectations were at the time he built this place and put everything together. Now she has some very deep soul searching to do in order to figure out what she really wants not just what is expected of her. Great story, we are moved to each next chapter naturally by the story, what an exciting tale, well crafted by a very creative mind. Thank you, Kate.

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Kate Granger's avatar

Hi Chester thank you for your lovely comment. It’s a thrilling location and lovely characters - we are all on the journey together.

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Damimgood's avatar

KATE it's a little different but we'll see what happens. I trust your writing it's never bad just better sometimes.

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Kate Granger's avatar

Hi D. Thank you. To be honest this may not be the right series for you. First Class Fucking season 2 chapter 1 was launched an hour or so ago might be better.

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John Elliot's avatar

I’m loving this slow development of what promises to be another great series Kate. What a way for me to get back into your stories. As ever, you leave us desperate for more.

Have a lovely weekend.

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Kate Granger's avatar

Thank you John. It’s a lovely story to write and I am thrilled you are enjoying it.

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Sifu's avatar

🤔Now I'm wondering how he screened all the potential lovers.

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Kate Granger's avatar

Hi Jeff thank you. Perhaps we will discover the process. I hope you are having a great weekend

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Sifu's avatar

So far, so good. Hope you're enjoying yourself as well 😁

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Kate Granger's avatar

Awesome - games evening at our house. More than ten people playing charades and cribbage

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Sifu's avatar

Have fun! We're going to a cool dumpling restaurant. Our food will be brought to the table by a robot🤖

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Kate Granger's avatar

Oh nice. You won’t need to tip at least.

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Sifu's avatar

I still will. I don't want any motor oil "accidentally" getting in my soup dumplings.

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Maria's avatar

It seemed weird to me until Charlie’s note. Telling her to live her life and do the things they’d planned so he could (in essence) enjoy them with her was really quite beautiful.

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Kate Granger's avatar

Hi Maria, thank you. I thought so too. Charlie’s obsessive nature had to build something for his soulmate but I am pleased he left it for her to decide.

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Borock44's avatar

Great story tellers know how to paint a picture with words in which the audience can visualize the story being told.you Kate are an Artist with great skills who always captivate us with your talented story telling.thank you

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Kate Granger's avatar

Hi Borock. Thank you. I’m so touched by your lovely comment I feel quite emotional. I am thrilled you are enjoying this series. I wanted to try something a little different and I am enjoying the journey

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Greg Pendleton's avatar

As with all of your stories, Kate, and why I read more of yours than anyone else’s, is that you’re so original. Your readers initially follow you, and other writers of the genre, because we love reading about sex, and more specifically, erotica. But as hot and arousing as sex can be through the written word, it doesn’t replace the need for originality, storytelling, and an eye for originality and expression. I’m hooked already on this one, and I can’t wait to read the next chapter.

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Kate Granger's avatar

Hi Greg I am deeply touched by your lovely comment - thank you. I wanted to push some boundaries on this story and I am thrilled by the reception it received so far. Lots more intrigue to come with passion, romance and twists galore. Thank you for your immense support

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Jfhla's avatar

25 potential lovers, men and women! What a promising series …

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Kate Granger's avatar

Hi Jean-Francois, thank you. There is a whole lot of fun in store for a woman with high morals. Who knows what might happen? 😂😂

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Bill Chance's avatar

At home home. Now she has a hall pass and doesn't need it. She has a new home, home and is confused. Fun times ahead as she discovers herself. She keeps looking around going 'What the hell is happening? Fun times ahead indeed. Thank you, Kate.

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Kate Granger's avatar

Hi Bill, thank you. I’m so thrilled you enjoy the story - it’s a change for me, shorter chapters, more often and a slow burn. Also Kenya - such a beautiful place .

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Bill Chance's avatar

Slow burn is fast enough. More character building and exploration.

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