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Chester Holic's avatar

Although his part was brief in this chapter Claude showed the power. Couldn't agree morenwith Maria, whatever nasty stuff this guy brings, none of this trio is buying it. I liked Jacob's follow up at the school. Not letting their little girl out of his sight. Smart move on Craig's part to leave when suggest with all body parts attached and working. Claude and Jacob are no to be prattled with beyond a point. Good chapter, I need another cup of coffee after that chapter!

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Bill Chance's avatar

More intrigue, more fun. Well conceived. I've just read two very long chapters of two very different types of stories. I'm impressed. I still think turning some of your stories into novellas might help you financially but it would also take time away from your present writing. Thanks again for the entertainment.

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