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Great chapter and am loving Alicia's bright wit and quick ability to pick up on what on around her. Guess that could also be a product of the orphanage. Poor Jacob out numbered 2 to one. And now both the girls have him wrapped tightly around their little fingers. He couldn't be happier. Glad they finally had a chance for some adult time with a locked door. Wel one to parenthood. On their side is at least a sensitive and courteous daughter. She will probably ask Kate if she has any questions, oh that will be good, I can't wait... "Why were you sceeming in your bedroom, Kate?" BTW, was actually caught mid-coitus with wife on the stallion by my high school age son bursting into our bedroom without a knock. She wasn't even screaming, moaning a lot but not too loudly. He saw us mid question, turned around and closed the door behind himself. He later apologized and said he hoped it had not blown the moment. It had not, well except for some hard to contain laughter. I'll tell you about the mother in law call some other time. Love every chapter!

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Hi Chester. Thank you for all your wonderful support. I'm playing the long game which fits with advice readers in my Substack have given. Leaving Medium means I can iterate each story more because the workflow is less frantic. Making KEJ, MC, Sb and others work for the long term means having rich layers of substance in characters, locations and plot. I'm doing that gradually. Alicia is one addition, Izzy is another development on similar lines. I thought about how to pitch that embarrassing moment of 'Hey Mom why are you screaming' but I have to be careful because there are still somewhat censorial ideals around erotic writing..

I will get there and look forward to hearing your story soon.

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Well not to be a tease... wife and I were in the throws of a rather intense copulation with her having multiple climaxes while riding cowgirl. Her phone next to the bed rings with aged mother's ring tone so she leans over and picks up the phone and slows her pace to the next climax. I take advantage to catch my breath until I suddenly feel her cunt spasm on me like she is having another climax and as I look closely at her, she is listening to her mom with her hand over her mouth because she is cumming. I was okay with all this until the last climax and because of her slight change in angle or something, I couldn't hold back any longer and started to slowly pump all of my cum up inside her, right against her cervix so I know she felt every shot. Then she smiles and says, "Oh yeah, he is doing just fine, I think his day is going pretty well!" Then she said a quick goodbye and we had a laugh. By the time she hung up and we quit laughing, I was hard again so we kept going. Her Mother passed away 6 years ago but we still laugh about this now and then. Never had told her Mom.

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You should write these anecdotes into stories Chester

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That was the first one just for you, hope you liked my very amateur attempt.

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Nothing amateur about you Chester

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Sep 19, 2023Liked by Kate Granger

Ahhhhh, love starting my day with KEJ! After each chapter I’m dying to know what’s next! I agree that Alicia is a great addition to this story. A little girl that’s sharp and wise beyond her years fits in perfectly with Kate and Jacob’s world. Now, on to the wedding!

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Hi Maria I’m dying to know what happens next as well 😆 thank you for all your support. I’m really grateful that you read and support me

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🤣🤣

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Oh Kate, Kate, you’ve hit on another of my fetishes. I adore nipple play, both giving and receiving, and nipple clamps are among my favourite sex toys. Hot eroticism in this episode, but with the same level of detail in the developing relationships. Wonderful.

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Thank you John. Nipple clamps happening soon in a KEJ near you. Thrilled you enjoyed it.

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